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Saturday, 4 July 2009

MULTIPLY Writing Prompt #22: Independence

It was one of those hot sultry days in midsummer. “Sour cucumber time”, she thought, adopting an term she remembered from her school days. It was basically a German expression, but she thought when translated into the English language it expressed exactly how it was. Nothing happening, and if something did, then you really had to pull yourself together to react. Sally brushed a curl of her black hair back to its rightful position. In this heat even the dreaded curls would curl more, one of those things she probably inherited from her father; “probably” because she never actually knew him. Now that would make a story for the newspaper where she worked as journalist for local affairs. Those headlines might wake the town up in the sleepy days of summer. Based on a DNA analysis the father of our star reporter, Sally Bridger, has been found. His body was discovered in a long forgotten coal mine. She had only known her mother who had died some years ago with cancer. Her father was a chance meeting on a moonlit night, so her mother would tell her and thus Sally grew up without a father, but a wonderful mother who had been disowned by her family for the shame she had brought on them.

“No, no, definitely not” she thought, “That sort of excitement does not happen, not to me and a father who does not even know he is a father is the last thing I need at the moment. The only excitement around here is trying to swot that dammed fly that keeps buzzing around the last dregs of my coffee” and then she was suddenly startled by her telephone which began to ring.

“At last” she thought, but her hopes were soon destroyed when she noticed it was an internal call, probably from her boss telling her to call up the weather station and asked if a storm might be approaching. Such were the boring stories on a typical summer day in a newspaper office.

“Sally Bridger”

“Sally, I have a story for you.”

“Tom what sort of a story would you have. I thought you had nothing better to do than see if anything criminal had happened in town.”

“Yes, well I was listening to the police radio and they just brought news of a corpse they have discovered.”

“Tom, murder is not my business, give that to one of the chief editors. I only do local stuff, and I am too hot and bothered to jump into the middle of a full scale homicide at the moment.”

She put the telephone back on the hook. She was just about to wipe some beads of perspiration from the end of her nose when the telephone rang again.

“Tom please just leave me alone, I am glad when the afternoon is over and I can go home and take a cold shower.”

“Well here is the cold shower. Jeff said you should immediately go and see what this corpse is all about.”

“Ok, if Jeff said so, then I don’t have a choice, do I?” Jeff being the editor responsible for the news of the day, she knew she would have to start moving.

She again replaced the telephone and dragged herself to her feet, deciding that if she wanted to keep her job she should see what Jeff wanted from her. She knocked at his office door and entered. She hated his office. Jeff was a chain smoker and took absolutely no consideration whether others smoked or not and this combined with the heat of the day did not exactly improve her temper.

“Sally, I have work for you. Tom told me a corpse has been discovered in an apartment down by the park on Oak Avenue. The police are investigating and it would be a good idea if a member of our staff would take a look. Might develop into a good story.”

“OK, Jeff, shall I take a photographer with me?

“No, definitely not, we don’t want our public shocked with photos of a decaying corpse for breakfast tomorrow morning, just see if you can make a story for us; not too spectacular, just something to fill up the third page.”

She left the office just a little bit angry. “Third page, just third page, and I have to drive down town in a car on roads melting under temperatures of 30° centigrade for the third page. At least I had air conditioning in the office.”

However, work was work, and so she climbed into the car and drove off. At least she was bound for a quiet part of town and the trees from the park cast some shade on the buildings on Oak Avenue. She was thinking it being strange that a corpse had been found in a building in one of the better parts of town. Usually they were drugged up victims of the underworld found somewhere in a cellar, with no name or history. Just another unwanted person that no-one cared for.

She arrived at Oak Avenue and saw the police car and a van for the transportation of deceased persons. She entered the building, and began to climb the stairs. There were many apartments and it seemed the neighbours had nothing better to do than stand at their doorways and keep an eye on the scene of the crime. Eventually she reached an apartment on the top floor where the police were gathered at the entrance.

“Now that is all we need, Sally Bridger from the local Telegraph” spoke Inspector Holmes.

“It’s my job Sherlock” Sally said.

“Ok, now don’t be cheeky, otherwise I will call the Daily Post and then your story won’t be so exclusive any more. By the way, my first name is Sam.”

“Well it’s not my fault if your police greeting card says Detective S. Holmes. Can you give me some information on the corpse Sherlock, sorry Sam?”

Sally knew Sam Holmes quite well; he was always present when she was called out on police business for the newspaper. They were both in the same situation. She was left with the news on page three and he seemed to be eternally taking care of the corpses that were nothing special.”

“The victim is Miss Joan Carpenter, now aged 90 years old and she seems to have died five years ago, but nobody noticed.”

“What! Are you having me on. Tell me more.”

“That’s all there is to say; just someone that knew no-body. She was wealthy, never been married and owned the apartment where she lived. Her electricity and water bills were paid automatically from her bank account promptly once a month. If you want to know more, ask the neighbours. They are just waiting to have a mention in the newspaper. Start with the family downstairs.”

So Sally went down the stairs to the apartment below. There was a lady standing at the door on her own. Sally thought to herself, “on her own, because there was no room left to stand next to her.” She had never seen a woman with so many chins. She was small and had folded her arms over her apron. Sally knew the sort, just waiting to be asked something.

“Do you mind if I ask a few questions?”

“Of course not, are you from the local newspaper?”

“Yes”

“Oh, that’s lovely, my name is Mrs. Gallow, with a “w” at the end. I was the one who called the police.”

“Why?”

“Something seemed wrong. Since the heat wave, every time I left my place there was a funny smell around from the top floor. Well I mean it has been there for a few years, but it is really now quite strong. I knocked on Mrs. Carpenter’s door but no-one answered. I then started thinking it was funny actually, but I hadn’t seen her, you know Mrs. Carpenter, for some time, so I decided to call the police. You know we all have bought apartments here, no riff-raff, so you have to organise things yourself.”

“Oh, I see, so you waited five years until you decided to do something.”

“Now, just a minute, I mind my own business. I am not one of those prying busybodies, and I was just doing my duty like any citizen would.”

Sally decided to ask a few more neighbours, but the story seemed to be the same. Mrs. Carpenter was a wealthy independent lady. She had very little to do with her neighbours and liked to keep herself to herself.

She left the building with mixed feelings. Could something like that happen in this day and time? It seemed so. Could it happen to me, or anyone I know? She remembered when her mother died, She was not completely alone at the funeral, another lady was there who had laid a wreath on the coffin saying “Goodbye daughter”. She suddenly realised that perhaps she too was not so alone in the world, so this other lady at the funeral must be her grandmother.

Sally returned to the office and wrote her story for the newspaper, dropping it into Jeff’s office on the way home. When she arrived home, the story of Mrs. Carpenter was still in her mind. “This should not happen, a woman lying undiscovered for five years because she was proud to be independent. No, this is wrong. Was my mother like that, I think so. She gave me a good education, looked after me, and never refused my wishes. She loved me, but then she also had someone that loved her. Who was the strange lady at the funeral? No, this is silly, why do I start thinking about things like this; must be the hot weather.”

That night Sally did not sleep so well. Thoughts went through her head and the next morning before making breakfast she opened the suitcase where her mother kept all the private papers she had. Sally had never really gone through the documents because she felt she was prying into her mother’s private life. Her mother never said very much about her origins, although she knew she came from somewhere north of the town where she lived. What was the name of the place? Grangeville; yes that was it. So she went through the documents looking for something with the name Grangeville and an unopened letter fell into her hands, the sender being a Mrs. Bridger, address 3 Ceder Walk, Grangeville. She read the letter

“Dear Sandra (Sally’s mother’s name)

Please forgive me for the harsh words spoken on our last meeting. When you told me that you were expecting a child it was at first a shock. My sister also had an illegitimate child and I remember how she had been treated. She left our family and we never heard from her again. I don’t want this to happen to us. Please come home again and bring your daughter with you. There will always be room for you and your daughter with me.

Please forgive the stupid angry words I spoke when I told you to leave and please come back again.

With all my love

You ever loving mother.

Sally saw the date on the letter and realised it was at the time when her mother had discovered she had cancer and knowing her mother realised that she just could not burden her family with such a responsibility. No, her own mother was so independent that she would have refused any help.

Sally drank a cup of strong coffee after reading the letter. She jumped into her car, and drove non-stop for two hours to Grangeville It was a small town and she asked at the local post office where Ceder Walk was. She arrived at house No. 3, her heart beating in her mouth. She was all the more astonished to find the door being opened by a woman of her own age, one child hanging on her dress and another on the way.

“Sorry to bother you, but I am looking for a Mrs. Bridger. I believe she lives here.”

“Oh no, not any more, we bought the house from Mrs. Bridger a few years ago. She was a widow, her husband died some years ago, and she decided to retire to the old people’s home in Grangeville. I still see her from time to time when she takes a walk.”

“Thank you very much. Where can I find the home?”

“It is not very far, just drive to the end of this road and turn right . It is three streets down, a very large house standing in a park.”

“Thank you very much” answered Sally.

“Do you know Mrs. Bridger” asked the lady at the house.

“Oh yes, she is my grandmother.”

and Sally drove to the senior home.

Her heart was beating in her mouth when she entered the reception and asked if a Mrs. Bridger was one of the residents.

“Yes, dear” the receptionist answered “do you know her?”.

“She is my grandmother.”

“Then you must be Sally” was the answer “Mrs. Bridger will be so happy to see you. She is sitting on the bench under the large oak tree in the garden.”

When Sally heard those last words, her eyes filled with tears as she walked towards her grandmother.


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Friday, 3 July 2009

MULTIPLY The Dare: Clouds

Storm weather over Feldbrunnen


Well, let's start with some stormy weather. I took this one over our village when something was brewing up in the sky. I think for every cloud picture I have taken, about three escaped. I have a collection of clouds that I often use as backgrounds when I play around with the pictures.

Here is something a bit more friendly. The composition of the colours just fascinated me.


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Thursday, 2 July 2009

MULTIPLY Poetry Posse Week 38

Whitechapel Market


Do me a favour mate and give me some veg and fruit
Me talk ain't so refined 'cause I'm cockney and that's not cute


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MULTIPLY United Friends Challenge #158: The Dark Side of Jan Smit

This Challenge has been yoinked from a Worth1000 contest.



Sumax's Challenge


Great stories have great characters. A well-written and interesting character lives forever. Characters populate the story, motivate the action, and keep us interested.

Some memorable literary examples are:
Ahab, Elizabeth Bennett, Sherlock Holmes, Jay Gatsby, Hannibal Lecter, Scrooge.
You'll all have your own favourites.


In this Challenge you’re to write a very short story, introducing a character in a creative way. In a few paragraphs, of 300 words or less, give your readers a good taste of your character. Use setting, dialogue and actions, etc. instead of blatant description as your primary method.

Word Limit: 300 words. This limit will be enforced!





Jan Smit was an impressive person; Tall but with width. Dressed in his everyday black suit, with his black tie knotted at his bull like neck, he left an everlasting impression on everyone. This may have something to do with his profession. He was the owner of the largest, most well-known funeral parlour in town. All citizens had contact with him at one time in their life, but it was generally a contact they wanted to avoid. Jan knew that he had this effect on people and so he preferred to say little and leave the small print and details to the people who worked for him.

He was present at the demise of all the citizens; but Jan did not just bury them, have them put away in their shiny wooden coffins and covered with earth. He had other interests. Living for himself and not really expecting contact with fellow members of the human race, he squeezed every interesting feature out of a death that he could. It might seem strange, but his world only existed amongst the dead. There was no citizen in the town that would invite him to his daughter’s wedding, or to a family feast meaning that he led a somewhat solitary life, but he had his departed to keep him company.

Women? Oh yes, he knew a few women; mostly distraught widows that would cry for their departed husbands. Of course, there were those that were glad to see the back of an older frail partner, inheriting the wealth after the funeral. These were the companions that Jan Smit would choose. He would observe their day to day movements, note their characteristics and call on them a few days after the funeral to ask if they were satisfied and everything was to their satisfaction.


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Tuesday, 30 June 2009

MULTIPLY Creative Challenge #59: Salt of the Earth

Salt of the earth



You are the salt of the earth
The crust on my pie
The milk in my coffee
I just cannot lie

My world is complete
When you are around
You support me so often
When my hopes hit the ground

I cannot be without you
And I rely on your best
Sometimes you have problems
And then you have a rest

But we carry on together
We fight through thick and thin
There are evils outside
But against them we will win

You are everything for me
Salt of the earth and tutor
What would I do all day
Without my faithful computer


MULTIPLY Visual Aid #14: Thoughts on a Beach

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“So that’s that, it’s finished, all over, done with, nothing left, no future.”

“Now, just a minute, before you start getting all dismayed and depressive, just think of me.”

“Who, what, now I am hearing voices in my head. I really must be at the end of the line.”

“No you are not hearing voices; it’s me, your faithful companion. The one who has gone through thick and thin with you and always will, so just don’t give up, because if you do, then I stop existing as well.”

“Now I am at the end. I knew it – whoever you are, please go away, I want to be on my own.”

“Just a minute, now I have something to say; as long as you are here, I am as well, so you are never on your own.”

“This is ridiculous, just what do you mean, I want to go, leave everything behind me.”

“Yes, well that is going to be a little bit difficult. If you go I go too, and I want to stay a few years.”

“WHO ARE YOU?”

“Don’t shout at me, I can hear perfectly well. Just look around and you will see me.”

“All I can see is my shadow under the cold glaring sun up in the sky.”

“Yes, exactly, now you have it.”

“Now I am going out of my mind. Shadows don’t talk, at least not in real life.”

“Well this one does, don’t ask me why because I don’t know. I am enjoying it very much, or at least I was until you got into a sort of doomsday mood, so what has happened?”

“Well if you are really my shadow, that shouldn’t be difficult to figure. I mean you know who I am?”

“A human, like all of you, nothing more or less.”

“Look around at your shadow friends. Don’t they come in all shapes and sizes.”

“Wrong, we come according to the direction of the sun and now it seems to be going down, that’s why I am long.”

“OK, clever hat, but we have characters, we all do things individually.”

“So what do you do “individually"?”

“You tell me, you are always with me.”

“You perform with other humans on a stage, making a lot of noise. Everyone watches and claps hands. You live in a villa and sometimes we go swimming together in your pool and now and again you can’t sleep, so start taking tablets, which I don’t like, because then you sleep a lot and don’t give me a chance to show myself. Have I told you enough?”

“You were with me yesterday when I performed with the band.”

“Yes, now that was not so good. I spent most of the time lying on the floor. I heard a lot of booing and whistling and then you just ran off with me. It seems we have been running since and now we are on this abandoned beach, somewhere in the middle of nowhere, waiting.”

“Very good shadow; my career is at an end, I have no future. I just want to disappear forever.”

“Not as long as I am here; you just don’t know how lucky you are. You have me and I will always be with you and will never let you down.”

“Tell me more shadow.”

“Forget all this stage stuff and dancing around. What about your parents; when did you see them last?”

“I have not had time to visit them.”

“I liked it with your mum and dad, so let’s go and visit them.”

“Well I liked it as well, but I just have not had the time over the past couple of years.”

“Then make time and what about your villa perched up on the hill? Invite them to stay with you. Something else, do you remember Jenny?”

“Jenny was the girl I wanted to marry, but she left me because she couldn’t stand the stress of being with a popular singer in a famous group.”

“Yes, well I was talking to Jenny’s shadow and it seems that Jenny is just waiting for a sign from you. That would be heaven, me and Jenny’s shadow.”

“No, I don’t think Jenny would want me any more. No-one wants me any more.”

“I might not want you, but I need you, and I am sure your parents and Jenny does as well. Just give it a try for my sake. If you drown yourself in the sea, you are going to drown me as well. I am not happy having my last glimpse of the earth on a desolate, stony beach jumping into a cold unwelcoming sea with a frozen sun above just to add to the drama. So human, turn around and go back and face your responsibility, but please without all the pills and stuff. Let’s go and eat a hamburger somewhere.”

“You know what? I don’t believe that shadows can talk, I don’t believe that shadows like hamburgers, but all the same it is a good idea. Are you sure that Jenny still wants me?”

And he walked to the edge of the sea, he emptied his pockets of the last boxes of pills into the water and turned, marching towards the lights of the MacDonalds restaurant showing from the distant town.




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Monday, 29 June 2009

MULTIPLY United Friends Challenge #157: Grumpy in the morning


Kittigory's Challenge


What color is your love? Tell us in a poem which may include anything BUT the word "color".
- You may write about romantic love, parental love, filial love, or platonic love.
- No poem should be fewer than three lines.
- You may choose to write in any poetic form that is comfortable for you. Just be sure you adhere to the rules of the form you choose.
- Please tell us the form you choose to write in.


Note: No photographs or graphics, thank you/


Please read the Challenge carefully - there are several criteria to adhere to.




I think this is a Quatrain (but basically have not got a clue)



Black was the night when we first met
Thunder and lightening sounded
But I saw the love reflected in your eyes
from mine, we were really grounded

I lived with my mother, you lived far away
Our courtship was not so intense
But I knew what I wanted, and so did you
We got married to make it all sense

It was then I discovered that when you awoke
You were completely grumpy
The first morning you threw the cornflakes on the floor
Because you said they were lumpy

That was not good, it was very bad
And then you loaded the gun
I decided to go and hide in the closet
I had nowhere to run

But after an hour you were your loving self
No trace of bad temper, it was over
You told me you loved me, forever and ever
I forgave you and we were in clover

I soon discovered that this was your way
You were always crabby so early
I had to think it over, find a plan
In the morning you were always so surly

The first morning was a shock to tell the truth
But that was just the beginning
The second day your mood was worse
I had no chance of winning


You looked at me with you eyes so grim
And shouted “You are lazy and vain”
And then you chased me with whip in the hand
You did not even stop to explain

I ran for my life, to the garden I went
And hid myself in the shed
But half an hour later, you suddenly got tired
And we both went together to bed

I spoke to your mother, she said it is true
You are often bad tempered in the morning
But it soon comes to pass, it is just a plain fact
I should just accept as a warning

I will never forget when the tea had got cold
You decided it was time to strangle
I kicked you in the *****, you had so much pain
You calmed down, it was a new angle

I decided the best was to leave the bed
Some time before you awoke
You spent a full hour looking for me at home
The window you even broke

Nobody is perfect, I love you so much
Even with your morning attack
The priest he said for better or worse
Waking up with you is just black

Yes love can find so many ways
Life is not always a bowl of cherries
But we belong to each other, even on the black days
Don’t say sorry, just tell it to the fairies.


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MULTIPLY Rita's "Riting" Challenge #28: The Bridge



It must be at least twenty years since I came here. How things change so quickly. I nearly missed the place altogether, the paths grown over with long grass stalks and even the bridge beginning to show its age. I do not really know why I am here again, but I suppose memories drag you back to their origins and I did actually like John, well I did, but things can change so quickly.

The water was deep after the fresh rainfalls and tore its way through the countryside. The more it flowed the more speed and the noise was full volume under the bridge.

“Hey John, looks like a fairly strong current today.”

“Yea Flo, be glad when the dam is built, then there won’t be any more water flowing through.”

“Well, I don’t know John, it is really a romantic place to be, as we know quite well, don’t we? You and I together on the bench with the sound of water rushing past; just perfect for a romantic evening together.” Flo said with a glimmer in her eyes.

“You said it Flo, so let’s go home now, otherwise your mother and father might start getting worried, and I have to do some night shift tonight at the factory.”

Now John really thought I was stupid. He was just trying to avoid me lately and I know why. Wendy told me that she saw him at the bridge holding hands with that blond freak of a girl called Judy, and they were kissing. Just wait John, you and your nightshift; time that I did some night work as well.

It was a very romantic night, the crickets were chirping in the grass on the bank of the river, it was full moon and its reflection in the water made it look like a giant yellow balloon hanging in the sky. I just had the feeling that John did not have eyes for all that stuff. He was too busy with his hands exploring the blond bombshells body qualities and she seemed to be enjoying it. I decided on that evening that the long grass on the banks of the river can be really good for a hiding place. So there they were at our favourite place on the bench, doing the things that John and I usually did. He even seemed to be enjoying it and her giggles and sighs were really getting on my nerves. I should have been there in his arms, but just you wait you cow. Now they seem to be finished, she was buttoning up her blouse and he was manoeuvring around the front of his trousers putting things back in order. I suppose he will now say a quick goodbye and go on home.

At least he does when I am with him, but just look at that they are stepping up on the bridge and gazing sort of dreamy in their reflections. I must get a bit nearer to see what they are talking about.

“Judy you are the finest girl I have ever met, you have the most beautiful eyes, I just can’t get enough of you.”

“John I love you as well, but what about Flo. I thought she was your girl.”

“Forget it Judy; that was before I met you. She doesn’t want a boyfriend, just someone to pay for her and go out with; now you, Judy; that is really something different. I have given a few hints to Flo that I don’t have much interest any more. No, Judy, Flo is not for me, you are the girl I love. I have something for you.”

“Oh, John, that is just beautiful.”

It was then the light of the moon reflected on the diamond ring he was giving her. Not just a ring, but an engagement ring. I then had to act quickly; I crept up on the bridge behind them. They only had eyes for each other, and I gave our blond princess a good push. Unfortunately she grabbed onto John and they both landed in the strong current of the river flowing under the bridge. I did not really intend for John to get a watery grave, but things do not always turn out as they should.

So these many years later, I think it was perhaps a good job they built the dam down stream and the river dried up. They did find the bodies about two months later and it was just recorded as an unfortunate accident.

Think I better be getting home, the bridge just does not look the same without the water flowing below.

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Sunday, 28 June 2009

MULTIPLY Mono Monday Plus #51 (MM #65)

Bee in MarigoldI really did not have any bright ideas this week for something mono, so I started with this photo of a bee that settled on one of my marigolds and decided to do a monochrome of it in Piknik, bringing back the colours of the bee. I also did a frame around it in Piknik and a bit of a dark vignette around the edges. I also touched up the black and white with the contrast and brightness. Here is the result.





Bee in Marigold


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I was also a bit at a loss for something plus. Anyhow I took a photo of my flower box this week with the geraniums and I had a photo already of the Arc de triomphe that I took once on one of my stays in Paris.

GeraniumsArc de Triomphe by night


I then put the geraniums into CS3 Photoshop and removed the background with the magic wand and I layer a sky in the background. I then cut the arc de triomphe out with the magic wand removing the sky, tree and people and complete with lampost constructed a photo with the geraniums. I did a bit of clowning of the arc to make it look as if it was in the geraniums and there we are. I did the mirror frame in Piknik. I really did not have any brilliant ideas this week for something to do.


Arc de triumph & geraniums

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