tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1329843425686686021.post7132270459765595552..comments2023-10-29T11:58:38.001+01:00Comments on Welcome to the Anglo Swiss World: WordPress Daily Prompt: Choose your AdventurePat Gerber-Relfhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00309477888996997341noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1329843425686686021.post-29102009714629940142013-02-08T04:17:48.985+01:002013-02-08T04:17:48.985+01:00Let's hope they had a kitchen. LOL
Love your ...Let's hope they had a kitchen. LOL<br /><br />Love your story Pat and agree with Mitch.Shaynacwingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00725923296007124724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1329843425686686021.post-92221894380657780342013-02-06T19:15:01.650+01:002013-02-06T19:15:01.650+01:00I have already received two "endings" on...I have already received two "endings" on WordPress. I quite liked this one<br />"The child led her through the dark hallways of the strangely under lit ship and into a huge cavernous space filled with hundreds of children. A sea of tear stained, overly-large eyes silently followed her as she moved into the room. It reminded Rose of the scene in Chitty Chitty, Bang Bang when Dick Van Dyke finds all the banished children in the sewers under the castle. At first she is overwhelmed, her exhaustion hits a new peak from the thought of caring for all the orphans. But with a shake of her head, she rolls up her sleeves and says to the alien, “Take me to your kitchen.”"Pat Gerber-Relfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00309477888996997341noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1329843425686686021.post-73613141011823454322013-02-06T19:03:58.612+01:002013-02-06T19:03:58.612+01:00Nice piece of writing, Pat. I'm intrigued and ...Nice piece of writing, Pat. I'm intrigued and want to know more about 'them' and the invasion!! However, in terms of the Daily Prompt instruction, I think a better place to have finished would have been the words 'Rose looked down at the child...........' I think the last two sentences effectively give an ending in itself. MitchyLRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11423634734890422795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1329843425686686021.post-22567937993810563722013-02-06T16:56:52.198+01:002013-02-06T16:56:52.198+01:00nice, very nicenice, very niceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com